pretty nice man! I have a couple tips though
1) try to work on your speed a little on those lines. it's better to go fast and do easy tricks than to go slow and do hard ones.
2) I liked seeing you hit those street spots, but it did seem like there wasn't enough street clips in there. granted, there might not be a lot of spots near you, but work with what spots you do have. i feel like something interesting could go down at those wood ledges.......
3) try not to use a song that someone else has used. especially not one a pro used. I'm pretty sure I heard this song in one of mgp's edits. try to be original.
4) but other than those tips, it's really great man!
