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Ollie Constant FBHQer
Posts : 1071 Join date : 2012-11-13 Age : 27
| Subject: Hopefully a sticky.. Homemade/sketchup parks thread UPDATED Fri Nov 30, 2012 6:45 am | |
| So, here's park number 3 finished. I didn't have time to put any of the black accents on, but whatever. As usual, tell me what you think! What's good, how I can improve etc. person included for reference *EDIT hopefully we can get the mods to make this a sticky EVERYBODY POST THEIR PARKS HERE Link -> https://imgur.com/a/qRUKi
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Will Sparrow-Saunt Part of the Furniture
Posts : 3060 Join date : 2012-06-07 Age : 25 Location : Stockport, Manchester Companies : findlocalhotmoms.com Setup : Weca (what else?)
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| Subject: Re: Hopefully a sticky.. Homemade/sketchup parks thread UPDATED Fri Nov 30, 2012 6:49 am | |
| Looks good, but, make one thread for themall instead of wasting threads. |
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Ollie Constant FBHQer
Posts : 1071 Join date : 2012-11-13 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Hopefully a sticky.. Homemade/sketchup parks thread UPDATED Fri Nov 30, 2012 7:01 am | |
| Sure. From now on I'll post em here. |
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Ken .I Part of the Furniture
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| Subject: Re: Hopefully a sticky.. Homemade/sketchup parks thread UPDATED Fri Nov 30, 2012 7:24 am | |
| This looks real nice! A bit crowded but it's alot better than the last 2 |
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TaylorT Part of the Furniture
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| Subject: Re: Hopefully a sticky.. Homemade/sketchup parks thread UPDATED Fri Nov 30, 2012 7:42 am | |
| much nicer. you're improving, my friend |
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Ollie Constant FBHQer
Posts : 1071 Join date : 2012-11-13 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Hopefully a sticky.. Homemade/sketchup parks thread UPDATED Fri Nov 30, 2012 7:50 am | |
| Thanks guys |
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Ollie Constant FBHQer
Posts : 1071 Join date : 2012-11-13 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Hopefully a sticky.. Homemade/sketchup parks thread UPDATED Fri Nov 30, 2012 7:57 am | |
| Taylor where's finger shesh located? *edit NEVERMUND it's probs in Seattle right? Maybe I can come down from Vancouver! *edit 2 maybe I can sponsor the event by building a park for it and bringing it down
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Oscar V. Part of the Furniture
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| Subject: Re: Hopefully a sticky.. Homemade/sketchup parks thread UPDATED Fri Nov 30, 2012 7:59 am | |
| It looks better now the granite pad might be too close to the ledge. Also don't double post. |
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Ollie Constant FBHQer
Posts : 1071 Join date : 2012-11-13 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Hopefully a sticky.. Homemade/sketchup parks thread UPDATED Fri Nov 30, 2012 8:01 am | |
| It's an entirely different park... Also I know all future parks will be posted here |
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connar FBHQ Beginner
Posts : 42 Join date : 2012-11-23 Age : 104 Location : Canada Setup : 1- Prete, China Wides, Flatface G6D, Rip
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| Subject: Re: Hopefully a sticky.. Homemade/sketchup parks thread UPDATED Fri Nov 30, 2012 8:30 am | |
| Because your posting so many of these from now on Im simply going to criticize everything wrong, dont take this offensively i think the parks are really coming a long just trying to save time.
Stair with wall rail - virtually unusable
Kicker next to the 2 quarter pipes - almost no space to land before there is a slight drop, I would hate to use that. also its centered in the park meaning you have to reach over to use it blocking everything in between there eliminating opportunities for other people to skate those.
Granite slab - Centered in the park, making it an obstruction for anyone else using the park and difficult to use.
You need to work on your flow of the park and (PERSONALLY) I wouldnt place obstacles on the inside of the table, avoiding that makes it easier for whoever is using you park to set up lines. When you center objects it forces whoever is using them to reach over and focus on that one piece of the park, its also a bitch to do and I hate having to reach when I fingerboard. Just a few tips, you're improving but its not quite there yet IMO. |
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Ian B FBHQ Regular
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| Subject: Re: Hopefully a sticky.. Homemade/sketchup parks thread UPDATED Fri Nov 30, 2012 9:02 am | |
| Looks pretty sweet just tone it down with the amount of obstacles and watch your placement! |
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TaylorT Part of the Furniture
Posts : 2568 Join date : 2010-03-21 Age : 27 Location : Seattle Washington Companies : Designer @ ¿Maybe? Skateboards, Live Video Director @ Westgate Chapel, Friend of Ollie @ Compiny Fingerboards Setup : Until further notice:
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| Subject: Re: Hopefully a sticky.. Homemade/sketchup parks thread UPDATED Fri Nov 30, 2012 9:56 am | |
| alright oliver here's the one i just made. it's 4ft x 4ft, is a plaza type, and has an olive accent color honestly idk how it would even turn out, most of the dimensions are like, one or two inches high here and there, so it's pretty flat, but would lose realism to go higher. anyways, i had fun making it. i've gotta figure out how to render these.. click the spoiler for more pics: - Spoiler:
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Patrick Self FBHQ Regular
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| Subject: Re: Hopefully a sticky.. Homemade/sketchup parks thread UPDATED Fri Nov 30, 2012 11:00 am | |
| lol taylor first try and its better than olivers.
AND oliver you want to know why its betteR? well tis becuas e of its FLOW.
but your parks are getting better. |
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SeamusMcFlurry Supporter
Posts : 1986 Join date : 2012-05-17 Age : 36 Location : Newcastle, UK Companies : Mars Hill Fingerboarding Setup : Compiny 33.5 Final Test Deck
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| Subject: Re: Hopefully a sticky.. Homemade/sketchup parks thread UPDATED Fri Nov 30, 2012 11:01 am | |
| That looks awesome Taylor. Love the flowly lines, and that stir set looks like fun |
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Tyler Part of the Furniture
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| Subject: Re: Hopefully a sticky.. Homemade/sketchup parks thread UPDATED Fri Nov 30, 2012 12:09 pm | |
| oliver i like your parks and i love that little kinked handrail going down the stairset to the side, but listen to what these guys said about flow |
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kerryDETH Admin
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| Subject: Re: Hopefully a sticky.. Homemade/sketchup parks thread UPDATED Fri Nov 30, 2012 12:17 pm | |
| holyshit.. taylor that's mindblowing. yours is nice oliver, but flow still needs to be worked on. taylor's idea is a perfect example |
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TheFingerBreaker FBHQ Regular
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| Subject: Re: Hopefully a sticky.. Homemade/sketchup parks thread UPDATED Fri Nov 30, 2012 2:37 pm | |
| Look's awesome gonna start building my park tomorrow |
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Natefb Blossoming FBHQer
Posts : 322 Join date : 2012-11-06 Age : 30 Location : USA Setup : Pure 32mm
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| Subject: Re: Hopefully a sticky.. Homemade/sketchup parks thread UPDATED Fri Nov 30, 2012 2:46 pm | |
| I think you all put wayyyy to much in the park! REMEMBER you have to be able to make the stuff tooo ha.. ive made a park with everything too close before and it totally ruins the whole park! space the stuff out and add what you REALLY want in the park! |
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eddie Victory FBHQ Regular
Posts : 542 Join date : 2012-11-30 Age : 38
| Subject: Re: Hopefully a sticky.. Homemade/sketchup parks thread UPDATED Fri Nov 30, 2012 3:29 pm | |
| Oliver that park looks awesome id love to shred it!!!! |
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Ollie Constant FBHQer
Posts : 1071 Join date : 2012-11-13 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Hopefully a sticky.. Homemade/sketchup parks thread UPDATED Fri Nov 30, 2012 3:41 pm | |
| - Patrick Self wrote:
- lol taylor first try and its better than olivers.
AND oliver you want to know why its betteR? well tis becuas e of its FLOW. but your parks are getting better. Yeah, Taylor also got it first try because he's been fingerboarding for waaaaay longer than me. I'll work on my flow |
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Bakko Moderator
Posts : 1645 Join date : 2012-10-09 Age : 45 Location : Rehab Companies : Primitive Decks Co.
| Subject: Re: Hopefully a sticky.. Homemade/sketchup parks thread UPDATED Fri Nov 30, 2012 9:06 pm | |
| You both get a BIG + from me for not copying BRR parks and calling them G(insert number), its cool that you are going your own thang guyes. Keep at it and get building!! |
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Jay W FBHQ Regular
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| Subject: Re: Hopefully a sticky.. Homemade/sketchup parks thread UPDATED Fri Nov 30, 2012 9:11 pm | |
| Personally, I like Oliver's more than Taylor's. Oliver, your seems like a challenge to ride, and it's definantly filled with epic spots with endless possibilities and combos! Taylor, yours looks really clean but it just looks like a walk in the park that you'd just be running laps around... Keep up the good work both of you, and like Bakko said, Get Building! |
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Ollie Constant FBHQer
Posts : 1071 Join date : 2012-11-13 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Hopefully a sticky.. Homemade/sketchup parks thread UPDATED Fri Nov 30, 2012 10:04 pm | |
| - kerryDETH wrote:
- holyshit.. taylor that's mindblowing. yours is nice oliver, but flow still needs to be worked on. taylor's idea is a perfect example
I don't really think of flow the same way as you guys. I mountain bike a lot so I'm more used to specific long lines than general flow it's a little weird but it's just engrained I'm my mind |
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Ollie Constant FBHQer
Posts : 1071 Join date : 2012-11-13 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Hopefully a sticky.. Homemade/sketchup parks thread UPDATED Fri Nov 30, 2012 10:07 pm | |
| - kerryDETH wrote:
- holyshit.. taylor that's mindblowing. yours is nice oliver, but flow still needs to be worked on. taylor's idea is a perfect example
I don't really think of flow the same way as you guys. I mountain bike a lot so I'm more used to specific long lines than general flow it's a little weird but it's just engrained in my mind |
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TaylorT Part of the Furniture
Posts : 2568 Join date : 2010-03-21 Age : 27 Location : Seattle Washington Companies : Designer @ ¿Maybe? Skateboards, Live Video Director @ Westgate Chapel, Friend of Ollie @ Compiny Fingerboards Setup : Until further notice:
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Ytrucks X4 Tex Black
Flatface G6e's (or Oaks)
New Foamy Greatness
| Subject: Re: Hopefully a sticky.. Homemade/sketchup parks thread UPDATED Fri Nov 30, 2012 10:45 pm | |
| thanks guys for the kind comments. and yeah jay i see what your saying totally. i was aiming for the mellowed out style though, flat laying plaza type thing. it's all about your personality and preference, there's a style for everybody - Natefb wrote:
- I think you all put wayyyy to much in the park! REMEMBER you have to be able to make the stuff tooo ha..
ive made a park with everything too close before and it totally ruins the whole park! space the stuff out and add what you REALLY want in the park! mine is pretty spaced out, 4ft x 4ft is pretty big, and nothing is in the way of your arm i promise i'll do a more transitional park next time. plazas are just SO FUN to build in sketchup |
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