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Thechrisb
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PostSubject: Can you guys critique my video?    Can you guys critique my video?  EmptyThu Jul 03, 2014 6:35 pm

I am new to fingerboarding and the whole forum thing. I apologize if this is in the wrong section. This is my first review and I want to see how I did. https://youtu.be/l-A3jDhKen8
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PostSubject: Re: Can you guys critique my video?    Can you guys critique my video?  EmptyThu Jul 03, 2014 7:17 pm

this should be in the review section
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PostSubject: Re: Can you guys critique my video?    Can you guys critique my video?  EmptyThu Jul 03, 2014 7:27 pm

How do i move it?
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PostSubject: Re: Can you guys critique my video?    Can you guys critique my video?  EmptySat Jul 05, 2014 7:19 pm

Since you asked, I'll actually critique. happy

I used to review a lot of stuff in written form so these are a few point's I'd like to make.

You camera needs to be fixed. Whilst watching the video, it seemed to move all over the place or it could have been just adjusting focus and was really annoying.

You mentioned where you bought it from but you could give more info on how other people can buy it. I mean it's a TD product so it's gonna be everywhere but you could mention the RRP too which will be what most people will expect to pay.

You could also make more a comparison to similar products, such as Blackriver's Picnic Table/Mini version, the old version of the TD Picnic table, Big Construction, etc.

Other than that, it's a pretty informative video. I've had some extensive use on that obstacle as well and it's a pretty solid, yet cheap product.
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PostSubject: Re: Can you guys critique my video?    Can you guys critique my video?  EmptySat Jul 12, 2014 8:32 am

Xi wrote:
Since you asked, I'll actually critique. happy

I used to review a lot of stuff in written form so these are a few point's I'd like to make.

You camera needs to be fixed. Whilst watching the video, it seemed to move all over the place or it could have been just adjusting focus and was really annoying.

You mentioned where you bought it from but you could give more info on how other people can buy it. I mean it's a TD product so it's gonna be everywhere but you could mention the RRP too which will be what most people will expect to pay.

You could also make more a comparison to similar products, such as Blackriver's Picnic Table/Mini version, the old version of the TD Picnic table, Big Construction, etc.

Other than that, it's a pretty informative video. I've had some extensive use on that obstacle as well and it's a pretty solid, yet cheap product.
Thank you! Also stupid youtube auto chose the "auto stabilizer" so it wobbled around furiously. I will make another review soon and fix all these points!
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