Well, this was my tryout for hard knox, :\

Don't be too critical on the unlanded tricks, I've been having trouble with WMM and Sony Vegas Pro 9 for the past day, and another day figuring out my retarded camera format, so please tell me how to improve, what to do better, etc etc...

find a way to edit it. think about the tricks/lines you want to do and film them until you find one you like the best. lighting, camera angles, uhh...different places to fb (indoors/outdoors)? anywho, you're still better than most kids on yt.

thanks Ayden, appreciate the feedback

i tried editing it but everytime I would, it would say the files were corrupt and the video would go black, the only way to solve the problem was to not edit, just add it all together, once again I apologize...

The other clips I wanted to have in there were outside on some marble but they turned black....

sick, but, yea, without editing it makes what could be a good video, a lot worse
Still some sick stuff in there though!

Thanks guys, i'm bound to figure out my editing problem, then I'll be posting a lot more! Hopefully finding new camera angles, lighting, etc...

First time making videos

i think you need to slow down a little bit, it seems like before you land your first trick your already looking ahead to the next one even if your not set up correctly, some editing would do wonders but i think more patience in your style would do wonders as well. Windows movie maker might be better for you to mess with till you figured out your other programs, its super simple and can make some decent flicks.

Thanks antwOn, I think what you said is right, I do need to slow down, thanks for your input

What MF said
Try and slow everything down and work out what feels best for you, then go from there.
Nice video dude, got potential.

been working on a line for about 2 hours I plan on filming, been slowing it down and getting the best finger positioning for it, trying to get a kickflip nosemanual, nollie tre flip out