So, here's park number 3 finished. I didn't have time to put any of the black accents on, but whatever. As usual, tell me what you think! What's good, how I can improve etc. person included for reference
*EDIT hopefully we can get the mods to make this a sticky EVERYBODY POST THEIR PARKS HERE
Link -> https://imgur.com/a/qRUKi

Looks good, but, make one thread for themall instead of wasting threads.

Sure. From now on I'll post em here.

This looks real nice! A bit crowded but it's alot better than the last 2

much nicer. you're improving, my friend

Thanks guys

Taylor where's finger shesh located?
*edit NEVERMUND it's probs in Seattle right? Maybe I can come down from Vancouver!
*edit 2 maybe I can sponsor the event by building a park for it and bringing it down

It looks better now the granite pad might be too close to the ledge. Also don't double post.

It's an entirely different park... Also I know all future parks will be posted here

Because your posting so many of these from now on Im simply going to criticize everything wrong, dont take this offensively i think the parks are really coming a long just trying to save time.

Stair with wall rail - virtually unusable

Kicker next to the 2 quarter pipes - almost no space to land before there is a slight drop, I would hate to use that. also its centered in the park meaning you have to reach over to use it blocking everything in between there eliminating opportunities for other people to skate those.

Granite slab - Centered in the park, making it an obstruction for anyone else using the park and difficult to use.

You need to work on your flow of the park and (PERSONALLY) I wouldnt place obstacles on the inside of the table, avoiding that makes it easier for whoever is using you park to set up lines. When you center objects it forces whoever is using them to reach over and focus on that one piece of the park, its also a bitch to do and I hate having to reach when I fingerboard. Just a few tips, you're improving but its not quite there yet IMO.

Looks pretty sweet just tone it down with the amount of obstacles and watch your placement!

alright oliver here's the one i just made. it's 4ft x 4ft, is a plaza type, and has an olive accent color honestly idk how it would even turn out, most of the dimensions are like, one or two inches high here and there, so it's pretty flat, but would lose realism to go higher. anyways, i had fun making it. i've gotta figure out how to render these..

lol taylor first try and its better than olivers.

AND oliver you want to know why its betteR? well tis becuas e of its FLOW.

but your parks are getting better.

That looks awesome Taylor. Love the flowly lines, and that stir set looks like fun

oliver i like your parks and i love that little kinked handrail going down the stairset to the side, but listen to what these guys said about flow

holyshit.. taylor that's mindblowing. yours is nice oliver, but flow still needs to be worked on. taylor's idea is a perfect example

Look's awesome gonna start building my park tomorrow

I think you all put wayyyy to much in the park! REMEMBER you have to be able to make the stuff tooo ha..
ive made a park with everything too close before and it totally ruins the whole park! space the stuff out and add what you REALLY want in the park!

Oliver that park looks awesome id love to shred it!!!!

Patrick Self wrote:

lol taylor first try and its better than olivers.
AND oliver you want to know why its betteR? well tis becuas e of its FLOW.
but your parks are getting better.

Yeah, Taylor also got it first try because he's been fingerboarding for waaaaay longer than me.
I'll work on my flow

You both get a BIG + from me for not copying BRR parks and calling them G(insert number), its cool that you are going your own thang guyes. Keep at it and get building!!

Personally, I like Oliver's more than Taylor's. Oliver, your seems like a challenge to ride, and it's definantly filled with epic spots with endless possibilities and combos! Taylor, yours looks really clean but it just looks like a walk in the park that you'd just be running laps around... Keep up the good work both of you, and like Bakko said, Get Building!

kerryDETH wrote:

holyshit.. taylor that's mindblowing. yours is nice oliver, but flow still needs to be worked on. taylor's idea is a perfect example

I don't really think of flow the same way as you guys. I mountain bike a lot so I'm more used to specific long lines than general flow it's a little weird but it's just engrained I'm my mind

kerryDETH wrote:

holyshit.. taylor that's mindblowing. yours is nice oliver, but flow still needs to be worked on. taylor's idea is a perfect example

I don't really think of flow the same way as you guys. I mountain bike a lot so I'm more used to specific long lines than general flow it's a little weird but it's just engrained in my mind

thanks guys for the kind comments. and yeah jay i see what your saying totally. i was aiming for the mellowed out style though, flat laying plaza type thing. it's all about your personality and preference, there's a style for everybody

Natefb wrote:

I think you all put wayyyy to much in the park! REMEMBER you have to be able to make the stuff tooo ha..
ive made a park with everything too close before and it totally ruins the whole park! space the stuff out and add what you REALLY want in the park!

mine is pretty spaced out, 4ft x 4ft is pretty big, and nothing is in the way of your arm

i promise i'll do a more transitional park next time. plazas are just SO FUN to build in sketchup