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PostSubject: Re: Taking Constructive Critisism   Taking Constructive Critisism EmptyMon Jul 25, 2011 12:16 am

it was okey, bit sketchy but keep practicing,
whats ya set-up there
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PostSubject: Re: Taking Constructive Critisism   Taking Constructive Critisism EmptyMon Jul 25, 2011 1:13 am

Pretty good but I agree with above less sketch =more success
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PostSubject: Re: Taking Constructive Critisism   Taking Constructive Critisism EmptyMon Jul 25, 2011 1:15 am

Setup is john C Deck With Nocomply roll nines and some dump trucks
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PostSubject: Re: Taking Constructive Critisism   Taking Constructive Critisism EmptyMon Jul 25, 2011 1:16 am

THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Taking Constructive Critisism   Taking Constructive Critisism EmptyMon Jul 25, 2011 1:17 am

Yea I look back and i see that some nollie tricks and the hardflip back tail was sketch ill make sure ill make em cleaner!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Taking Constructive Critisism   Taking Constructive Critisism EmptyMon Jul 25, 2011 1:40 am

try not to double post :/

the tricks were good, but i somewhat lost interest. it might have been the song. and yeah, work on cleanness.

i overall liked it though.
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PostSubject: Re: Taking Constructive Critisism   Taking Constructive Critisism EmptyMon Jul 25, 2011 3:04 am

sweeeet
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PostSubject: Re: Taking Constructive Critisism   Taking Constructive Critisism EmptyMon Jul 25, 2011 3:55 am

Good fingerboarding, But you should try to use more interesting lightning, and try to clean up the sketch. Song was horrible no offence.
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PostSubject: Re: Taking Constructive Critisism   Taking Constructive Critisism EmptyMon Jul 25, 2011 7:28 am

That was swag,just watch on sketchyness
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PostSubject: Re: Taking Constructive Critisism   Taking Constructive Critisism EmptyMon Jul 25, 2011 7:51 am

yeah I agree with everyone else.
Nice video but try not to film sketchy fingerboarding. happy
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yeah go for simpler tricks to make it look cleaner happy
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PostSubject: Re: Taking Constructive Critisism   Taking Constructive Critisism EmptyMon Jul 25, 2011 11:50 am

agree with rafi, i did lose interest. OVERall a pretty decent vid happy
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PostSubject: Re: Taking Constructive Critisism   Taking Constructive Critisism EmptyMon Jul 25, 2011 1:35 pm

pretty sick man
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PostSubject: Re: Taking Constructive Critisism   Taking Constructive Critisism EmptyMon Jul 25, 2011 3:50 pm

Thanks you guys this is really helping me out!
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PostSubject: Re: Taking Constructive Critisism   Taking Constructive Critisism EmptyMon Jul 25, 2011 4:27 pm

Constructive criticism:

Some of the tricks look like you pause for a split second before you pop the trick. Try and make it flow more naturally.
Almost all of the flip to grind tricks have the board bounce before you actually get into the grind. Try and catch the flips before you get into the grind.
Some rotation tricks are landed but without the full 180 turn so you roll off at an angle. Try and rotate fully each time.
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PostSubject: Re: Taking Constructive Critisism   Taking Constructive Critisism EmptyMon Jul 25, 2011 7:40 pm

I appreciate this one a lot^
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PostSubject: Re: Taking Constructive Critisism   Taking Constructive Critisism EmptyMon Jul 25, 2011 9:59 pm

Thanks! I'll look out for your next vid. happy
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PostSubject: Re: Taking Constructive Critisism   Taking Constructive Critisism EmptyMon Jul 25, 2011 11:25 pm

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