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Ollie
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 | | Subject: Second try at a park.. This time full size! Thu Nov 29, 2012 6:08 am | |
| Link-> https://imgur.com/a/6uw2B Tell me what you think! Input is great so I can improve for what ever park I design next. Example of input I wouldn't want: "this park looks like it would suck ass and i hate it"  Thanks! |
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connar
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| | Subject: Re: Second try at a park.. This time full size! Thu Nov 29, 2012 6:41 am | |
| Both the marble or granite things are unusable because of the location, half pipe looks ridiculously over sized. Other then that I dont see anything too wrong with the park, without dimensions its impossible to tell how truly usable things are. However lots of personal turn offs with this park not a fan sorry. |
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Ollie
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| | Subject: Re: Second try at a park.. This time full size! Thu Nov 29, 2012 7:11 am | |
| Eh no worries everybody has their opinions  I post them here to get advice so thanks! The pipe is 12 inches tall btw in case you were wondering. Would you say it's an improvement on my first park? |
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connar
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| | Subject: Re: Second try at a park.. This time full size! Thu Nov 29, 2012 7:14 am | |
| Both have a lot of the same issues, one of the biggest is flow and usability. However without hitting the nail on the head on those 2 fronts it is impossible to make a perfect park. |
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Danny H
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| | Subject: Re: Second try at a park.. This time full size! Thu Nov 29, 2012 7:53 am | |
| I like the middle bit  The stuff around the edge looks awkward to use, and the pipe is way too big! 12 inches tall is 1 ft! Massive for a fingerboard park Looks nice though, just needs some re-arrangement and tweaking! |
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Patrick Self
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| | Subject: Re: Second try at a park.. This time full size! Thu Nov 29, 2012 8:11 am | |
| instead of that awkward little block of granite next to the half pipe, try putting like a wallride or smth. also wiht the extra spaces on the side maybe put like a pole jam or like i little fire hydrant to make it look realistic.
also halfpipe is wayy to big and the little triangle next to the stairset is stupid.
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Ollie
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| | Subject: Re: Second try at a park.. This time full size! Thu Nov 29, 2012 8:12 am | |
| Thanks Danny yeah I thought the pipe looked a little too big, I dono when I was looking at some brr parks that's what some of them seemed to be like. I agree the little park thingy on the edge is a bit weird.. Might replace that. |
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Ollie
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| | Subject: Re: Second try at a park.. This time full size! Thu Nov 29, 2012 8:16 am | |
| - Patrick Self wrote:
- instead of that awkward little block of granite next to the half pipe, try putting like a wallride or smth. also wiht the extra spaces on the side maybe put like a pole jam or like i little fire hydrant to make it look realistic.
also halfpipe is wayy to big and the little triangle next to the stairset is stupid.
Yep. Agree with all your points exept the triangle. I think it would be a cool transition onto a couple things. Polejams a cool idea as well as the fire hydrant. Maybe a bench or smth as well. Time to revise again |
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TaylorT
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| | Subject: Re: Second try at a park.. This time full size! Thu Nov 29, 2012 8:56 am | |
| MUCH better. tweak the dimensions and layout a little and you'd have a fun park! |
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Bakko
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| | Subject: Re: Second try at a park.. This time full size! Thu Nov 29, 2012 9:25 am | |
| Try looking at some inspirational videoes of purpose built skateparks (the ones built for indoor events/contests), as they have some nice features to them. And if you then keep it mellow and minimalistic it will hit a few sweetspots i guess. Also..remember to allow for more landingspace/flatlands. As previosly stated by others, this looks kinda like the old BR parks. Try to forget the idea of putting big/tall ostacles all over the place and filling the gaps with every this and that.. These images is of a park in that kategory im on about, so you get the picture. It was built in both fullscale for skateboarding and miniature scale with a few tweaks for fingerboarding.   Hope this gives you some pointers. Again, do check out loads of videoes from skateboarding events/contests with purpose built parks. Their great and can be converted into fingerboardparks with great success.. |
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TaylorT
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| | Subject: Re: Second try at a park.. This time full size! Thu Nov 29, 2012 9:28 am | |
| ^could not agree more |
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Patrick Self
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| | Subject: Re: Second try at a park.. This time full size! Thu Nov 29, 2012 10:55 am | |
| - Oliver32.5 wrote:
- Thanks Danny yeah I thought the pipe looked a little too big, I dono when I was looking at some brr parks that's what some of them seemed to be like. I agree the little park thingy on the edge is a bit weird.. Might replace that.
if you had a loose, oldschool style then yeah the triangle would be cool but put it further away from the stairs so its not TOO close |
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Ollie
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| | Subject: Re: Second try at a park.. This time full size! Thu Nov 29, 2012 3:36 pm | |
| Couldn't agree more with both your suggestions. Thanks guys |
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Bobbernaut
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| | Subject: Re: Second try at a park.. This time full size! Thu Nov 29, 2012 5:15 pm | |
| Looks fun, some things arent good, like the halfpipe. But i dont think you are gonna build it, its difficult bro |
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Ollie
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| | Subject: Re: Second try at a park.. This time full size! Thu Nov 29, 2012 7:05 pm | |
| Thanks bubber. Yeah I changed up the half pipe |
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Ollie
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| | Subject: Re: Second try at a park.. This time full size! Fri Nov 30, 2012 12:06 am | |
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TaylorT
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| | Subject: Re: Second try at a park.. This time full size! Fri Nov 30, 2012 12:35 am | |
| never let a half/or quarter pipe be taller than it is wide, imo |
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Ken .I
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| | Subject: Re: Second try at a park.. This time full size! Fri Nov 30, 2012 3:10 am | |
| It's way better than the park before! But it's a little not realistic looking how high the half pipes and quarters are.
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Ollie
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| | Subject: Re: Second try at a park.. This time full size! Fri Nov 30, 2012 3:36 am | |
| The half pipe height have been shrunk from 12 to 9 inches tall. It's way better now. Thanks man! |
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grantinator
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